The Monster
I finally saw it standing piratically, with a scar on it’s right cheek. I went to give a deathly scream then…nothing, not even a word. It stared as if I was it’s quarry. Then it loped closer to me. I tried to scream again but still nothing. It gave a rancid smile as it showed his dagger like teeth and it’s aqua blue fur.
“Hello,” said the monster.
“What is your name?” I mumbled quietly.
“My name is Sly,” he replied, “will you be my friend?”
“Yes,” I said and he followed.
We quietly sneaked past the granite wall, and up the stairs. The evil odour I could still smell, it surrounded my room…
It’s just me and Sly.
July 24th, 2007 at 2:22 am
cool little story im thomas I live in new zealand and go to korokoro school in wellington look at my blog at:
thomtomstuffs.blogspot.com
and my classrooms blog at:
roomonekidsstuff.blogspot.com
we would love a coment
July 25th, 2007 at 12:02 am
Hi there, my name is Rhys and I am a student in Room 1 at Korokoro school in Year 8.
I enjoyed reading this post because it was a great detailed story and its was enjoying to read.
You can find my blog at http://hellobrotherfromanothermother.blogspot.com/
My class blog is at www.roomonekorokoroschool.blogspot.com
And our podcasts are at http://roomonekorokoroschool.podomatic.com
We would love your comments!