Comments on: How to wash your body http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/ Year 6's classroom blog Tue, 19 Aug 2008 23:06:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 By: Cielo and Emily (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-441 Cielo and Emily (Sydney) Sun, 04 Mar 2007 09:28:52 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-441 The steps were in chronological order which was great. What made you think of this procedure? The steps were in chronological order which was great. What made you think of this procedure?

]]> By: Liam (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-440 Liam (Sydney) Sun, 04 Mar 2007 09:26:23 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-440 I like your post but I think in your caution you should write you have to be 4 or over because some little kid I think would eat it. I like your post but I think in your caution you should write you have to be 4 or over because some little kid I think would eat it.

]]> By: Filoi (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-439 Filoi (Sydney) Sun, 04 Mar 2007 09:22:56 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-439 It was a really good procedure because of the way you wrote it. It made sense and I understood it. It was clear and I reckon all people would understand it. I am looking forward to seeing another procedure from you. It was a really good procedure because of the way you wrote it. It made sense and I understood it. It was clear and I reckon all people would understand it.
I am looking forward to seeing another procedure from you.

]]> By: Maxwell (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-438 Maxwell (Sydney) Sun, 04 Mar 2007 09:20:06 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-438 When you say keep away from children aged one or under do you men the product or actually washing a person one and under. The rest is good. When you say keep away from children aged one or under do you men the product or actually washing a person one and under.
The rest is good.

]]> By: Matthew (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-437 Matthew (Sydney) Sun, 04 Mar 2007 09:14:16 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-437 A good aim to start off with. One thing I don't know in your instructions is a flannel. We use something different. Pretty smart to also include a warning. I think it is a pretty good procedure. A good aim to start off with. One thing I don’t know in your instructions is a flannel. We use something different. Pretty smart to also include a warning. I think it is a pretty good procedure.

]]> By: Sheena (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-436 Sheena (Sydney) Sun, 04 Mar 2007 09:11:32 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-436 I really like it because the requirements are written and the steps are in chronological order. It really looks good. I really like it because the requirements are written and the steps are in chronological order. It really looks good.

]]> By: bethany yr6 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-431 bethany yr6 Fri, 02 Mar 2007 16:04:59 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-431 well done ebony and darcy i think that you two work well together. I liked how you used the words 'massage' in stead of using boring words like just 'rub' you expressed it in more detail. Do you like writing out intructions for many things????? from bethany yr6 well done ebony and darcy i think that you two work well together. I liked how you used the words ‘massage’ in stead of using boring words like just ‘rub’ you expressed it in more detail. Do you like writing out intructions for many things?????
from bethany yr6

]]> By: Judy O'Connell http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-428 Judy O'Connell Fri, 02 Mar 2007 11:35:16 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-428 Well, looks like no-one could work out what to change in point 3 in the instructions, if they are going to work in Australia! In Australia we usually call a 'flannel' a 'face washer'. Lots of people would not know that you could use a flannel to wash yourself with! In fact, they might think it is a flower - because there is a 'flannel flower' that lots of people like. Interesting how words are used differently in different places. Keep up the great work. Well, looks like no-one could work out what to change in point 3 in the instructions, if they are going to work in Australia!

In Australia we usually call a ‘flannel’ a ‘face washer’. Lots of people would not know that you could use a flannel to wash yourself with! In fact, they might think it is a flower - because there is a ‘flannel flower’ that lots of people like.

Interesting how words are used differently in different places.

Keep up the great work.

]]> By: Danielle and Emilia (Sydney) http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-425 Danielle and Emilia (Sydney) Thu, 01 Mar 2007 11:25:19 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-425 I really liked your instructions on how to wash your body. You have followed the structure and it made sense. My partner and I understood everything that was written also it was very clever to include the caution. If you were to write another one maybe you could include more detail. We like your use of the word 'disperse'. I really liked your instructions on how to wash your body. You have followed the structure and it made sense. My partner and I understood everything that was written also it was very clever to include the caution. If you were to write another one maybe you could include more detail. We like your use of the word ‘disperse’.

]]> By: Judy O'Connell http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-422 Judy O'Connell Wed, 28 Feb 2007 11:28:55 +0000 http://priestsic6.learnerblogs.org/2007/02/27/how-to-wash-your-body/#comment-422 Hello Ebony and Darcy! I decided to read your excellent instructions on how to wash you body. They were well written. Did you know that my students in Australia would probably write No.3 differently to your instructions? Do you know why? I wonder if you can work what would be different before I give you the answer? Perhaps another student has the answer and would like to write it here for you. Cheers. Hello Ebony and Darcy! I decided to read your excellent instructions on how to wash you body. They were well written.

Did you know that my students in Australia would probably write No.3 differently to your instructions?
Do you know why?

I wonder if you can work what would be different before I give you the answer?

Perhaps another student has the answer and would like to write it here for you.

Cheers.

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